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Here is an excerpt from my current WIP.
It is titled, but I’m not ready to release the name. I will, however, reveal that it is a collaboration with another, a British Dominant named James Collier. It is he who is the story-teller in this scene.
EXCERPT
“You are my bride, and I will have you, but not until you want me more than you have ever wanted anything in your entire life. Not until you are begging me to fuck you.”
I felt her quiver and heard the quick intake of breath.
“First, though, you must be punished for being so willful, for attempting to reject me.”
“I’m sorry, husband,” she whispered.
Husband again, hmmm…
“Face the wall and raise your hands above your head. It’s time you learned the sting of the crop.”
Whimpering, she turned around, and as she did I pulled off my belt, quickly wrapping it around her wrists and securing it to the ancient iron chains. I doubted it was a strong tether, but it would suffice, besides, it was all theatre. Lifting the crop I slid it back and forth across her bottom, still covered in the thin satin of her underwear.
“You will learn I am the Master of my house,” I decreed, and without warning I swished it down.
Her yelp echoed around the dim cavern, and quickly landing a second cut just below the first I felt the familiar surge of energy flow through in my being. Taking a moment, I dropped my hand between her legs, pushed aside the narrow gusset and felt her wetness; she was drenched, and I heard a soft moan escape her lips.
“You see? You’re already wet with need for my cock. Already your body is betraying you.”
Slipping her knickers down her legs, leaving them around her ankles as a simple restraint, I gazed lustily at the red marks striping her gorgeous backside; two horizontal lines over the roundness of her cheeks.
It’s like work of abstract art. I wish I could paint, I would preserve that in oil. It would be a masterpiece, a thing of beauty to enjoy for the rest of my days.
The thudding clink of the chains against the rock snapped me out of my reverie, and I moved to her side, placing the crop at her mouth.
“Hold this for me,” I said softly.
Her eyes were wide as she stared at me, and opening her mouth she took it between her teeth, biting down gently.
“Good girl, perhaps we’re getting somewhere. Your cunt is already gloriously slippery, and your fear is now greater for the sting of the crop than it is for my manhood. Am I right?”
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“and your fear is now greater for the sting of the crop than it is for my manhood. Am I right?”. Holy hell that’s HOT!!!!
It is? Megan, thank you!
I have to say that I loved the picture that you added at the beginning. It definitely set the right tone of the post. 🙂
Thanks, Meredith…I’m very pleased to hear you say that, because I thought so too, and one can never be sure. Such a HOT pic. One of my all-time favorites.
Oh I do agree about the pic. It is indeed the perfect pic for representing this hot scene.
I love what he says in the opening of this snippet “I will have you. But not until you want me more than anything you have ever wanted in your life” damn that’s hot!
The internal thought he has about painting her gorgeous, having it as a keepsake forever made me melt. Not only is he the strong dominant type, but he has an eye for beauty and strikes me as a bit sentimental.
Thanks so much for for this great snippet. I can’t wait for more! ☺
Melody, many thanks for such a comprehensive and insightful comment. So motivating! I’m truly grateful.
wonderful! The word choice is perfection here. I so need this book 😀
Joelle — you take my breath away. What can I say? Thank you!!
This is a great snippet. Coupled with that picture, it’s all very hot indeed.
I got a bit confused when he threatened her with the crop and then took off his belt. But luckily it all worked out OK in the end.
🙂 Thanks, Etta, yes, it all worked out in the end. I do get a bit confused myself sometimes, my little head has so many ideas and scenes running around it, there have been moments when it hasn’t QUITE worked out, but I think…I’m hoping…those days are behind me.
“Not until you are begging me to fuck you.” My God – it doesn’t get much better than that! Sexy scene as always, Maggie! 🙂
🙂 Thanks so much, Shelly. I know it’s something I wouldn’t mind hearing. 🙂
You always have the BEST pictures. I love this one. Mmmmmm! And it is all theatre, until someone gets spanked, cropped or fucked. Then it just down right fantastic. Loved this excerpt. May we have some more??
I do? Thank you! I do appreciate that because I spend SO much time looking for the right image for each blog (when I don’t have a cover of course). Sometimes it takes me longer to find the image than to write the piece.
Yes, you may definitely have more. Thank you for asking!!!